Ruse Of Metacarpi's "The Beginning Of The End"

This is where I'll be posting my screenplay. It is not formatted, and will probably be ugly to read, having switched from Microsoft Word to OpenOffice.

Just general feedback and opinions is all I'm looking for. This is the first edition, because I haven't gotten the revised edition copyrighted yet. So keep in mind, this was written 2 years ago, and has been changed quite a bit.

I'll post it tomorrow.